October 14, 2018
Description: Post your first ever or earliest poem
Leader: Jess (weirdelf)
Moderator(s): Wesley
Objectives: Just for curiosity, to see where we've come from.
Level of expertise: Open to all
Subject matter: Most of these poems will be polished or not actively editing. This is not really a workshop but more 'I'll show you mine if you show me yours' of our earliest works.
Most important:- Remember when posting your first poem to scroll down to 'Workshop' dropdown and select 'Poets first poems'.
Date:
Fri, 06/23/2017 to Tue, 06/23/2020
The Autumnal fever
Wow,Autumn once again is here
what a lovely season
for all poets so dear
what a beautiful autumn
you relay
here it’s raining,
then a bit cloudy
sunnier later
during the day
the clouds show anger
but quietly pass away
wonderful trees
leaves,
so colorfully display
my! what hues
I wish I could show you
wait
I’ll fetch my camera
for you
I was walking in a glade
lost in the gentle sound of water
cascading over the terrain
bare feet caressed by silt
a remainder of what once was rock
I knew history leaves a mark of which I would be a part
stepping out I touched a tree fallen to the ground
made me wonder if anyone had heard the sound
I stepped in the water again
it wasn't the same
neither was my breath
sometimes I feel
like an abandoned
hatchling
that God is too afraid
to touch
for fear he’ll leave his scent
and the other birds
will shun me
and I’ll die
an outcast
sometimes I feel
like God became
a man
with my very scent
just to
save me
but do I have
the nose
the acumen
to follow his
scent trail?
man & divine?
body
& sensible spirit?
Description:We are going to write about the environmental effects we have on our planet. Five stanzas and 200 words max. There is no minimum . But Any form is acceptable.
Sponsor(s):anonymous
Judge(s):anonymous
Objectives:Bringing attention to our environmental effects we have on our planet. PS don't forget to hit "contest" tag at bottom of page when submitting
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