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Confusion
The troubled mind
seeking solitude
amidst a vast multitude,
an array of thoughts
culminate into a juxtaposition
where to emerge
remains a vision
nay confusion,
ere the sun drowns beneath the ocean
time envelopes insanity
man remains silent
in remorseful vanity
Alas!
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Rula
Tue, 2014-02-04 01:41
Well said
Yes, alas!
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Ian.T
Tue, 2014-02-04 04:17
Loved
If only we could look inside and see just that perfection that we all want to achieve,
Without the influence of the day to day things that pass by, and attach to our thoughts.
This is where the ability to be able to think in an emergency comes in, the ability to block out all surrounding sounds and thoughts and react in a positive way.
Quite rare this ability and takes a lot of practice, like not hearing someone when they are shouting at you.
Take care have a quiet day, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Tue, 2014-02-04 10:05
you add salt to
wisdom
you are a King
of your own kingdom
well done
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Seren
Tue, 2014-02-11 09:16
Loved
I am a little wowed by this one its not a comment is it, this is a poem my friend
nice work
love JC xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Tue, 2014-02-11 17:49
thanks a lot
this is a poem
first time
not such a comment
loved
alidzain
Sat, 2014-02-15 13:58
Thanks for sharing
love this helluva piece. learn some new words.;)
Alid
loved
Sat, 2014-02-15 22:00
and thank you too
for ur kind reading
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