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Immortality updated

IMMORTALITY

Waters icy cold
pure and new
bubbling white and blue
melting mountain snow
into rivers flow
to live again its Spring.
like a soul waking from
Winter's sleep....

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A lovely piece yet I think that it needed a few more words where the waters reach out to the sea and then up into the clouds to be reborn as that Ice and snow.
Hope this finds you in charge of all those things that trouble you so.
Know that we walk with you always, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Thanks, Ian. I wanted this to be short and quick as a mimesis of the event itself.

joe

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It is complete as you have said.
You go well and take care,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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