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I will hypnotize you ( by Shirley, Rosi and Eddie)
Look into my ocean eyes
Of blue and green surprise
Then you will dance your own dance
And someone new you will find
A dance filled with passion
Which will lead to the place
Where it seems
That heaven and hell collide
Let go of your senses and ride the waves
I see your heart as a darkened cave
Open your mind and forget the past
Take the pain throwing it away at last
Quench your thirst
With the waters of satisfaction
It is found
In the soul of perfect attraction
If I am a witch I am the very best
As when I feel sorrow
I can never rest
Until I burn it in the heat I create
When I’m done
The hidden passion to love
Will stir inside your heart
And fly once again like a dove
As I can feel what’s in you
I sense all things beside you
Look into my ocean eyes,
And someone new you will find
It is guaranteed
That satisfaction after all my work
Will as always without a doubt
Be achieved.
Then and only then will I release you
From the power I possess
My hypnosis will slowly fade away
And no longer will you be obsess
But you don’t understand
that my obsession is with love
And won’t be broken
With no other power or spell
You may be a witch
And possess great magic powers
Nevertheless the love I feel
Is to far inside for any witch to dispel
So thank you for your try
There is nothing,
On this earth or heaven
That can push my love aside
Comments
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2010-12-30 21:09
Great work guys
I enjoyed the ride
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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loved
Thu, 2010-12-30 22:07
If the trio agrees then only
And no longer will you... be... obsess
can or could we do away with the..... be....
or alter it to
be obsessed
Perhaps English ain't my mother tongue
though I have known
very little of any other language
otherwise super a lative
loved
lou
Fri, 2010-12-31 05:29
TO ALL
A good team effort.
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
raj
Fri, 2010-12-31 14:35
A good threesome amalgamation
A good threesome amalgamation..i see a new trend here in Neopoet to confluence thoughts and feelings and let them flow through a joint venture.... i wonder though how you guys are able to do it...may be via chat...
with much love...and wishing you A Happy New Year 2011..
raj (sublime_ocean)
Eduardo Cruz
Fri, 2011-01-07 16:19
to all
I have not replied, because I feel that this is shirleys poem, and credit should go to where credit is do.
thank you all it was fun to work with my both lovelies
Always Eddie
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE