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Merry Christmas

Submitted by loved on Mon, 2013-12-16 11:48

Merry Christmas
Geremia and Esker as also ...Ian and Stan
are pillars of modern poetry....

I have observed over the past over three years
that I have been here,

some self styled stalwarts
love to drive women out

I have held many hands
but women are more sensitive than men
so take care

I am sure even Shakespeare would have been bitten
had he been here
now than then

Happy Reading
and
Merry Christmas to all poets...Neos and families and friends
particularly those who have ever read me
not withstanding my volumes over
poor quality

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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billypringle

Mon, 2013-12-16 12:08

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So slowly it becomes clearer - you thought I was just another nutter having a go at you. That could not be further from the truth. I have no animosity whatsoever against you , in fact ,i don;t even know you. Any comments i made were not personal, either sexist or whatever! You continue writing and aim for excellence and screw what people say. Happy Christmas to you and yours .
Jimm

loved

Mon, 2013-12-16 15:01

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thank you tc
but misogynistic is hardly a word to be used

loved

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Geremia

Mon, 2013-12-16 12:49

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Buon Natale e Felice Capo d''Anno.

Joe

loved

Mon, 2013-12-16 14:57

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Geremia
Joe Sir

loved

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Geremia

Tue, 2013-12-17 02:08

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Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year,

loved

Tue, 2013-12-17 17:34

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hope you do finally decide
not to stay alone
a family is a boon
some independence
has to be sacrificed

just weigh and do a calm decision take
let none upon you prevail

we could unknowingly make a mistake
but your own house
don't ever stake
who knows about tomorrow
who goes first
who does sorrow

loved

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mand

Mon, 2013-12-16 13:57

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Have a happy holiday - and may you have many, many more of them. I'll try and be around more often - but life can be very hectic.

Keep safe

Love Mand xxxxx

loved

Mon, 2013-12-16 14:58

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I do wish to reciprocate

loved

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Ian.T

Tue, 2013-12-17 03:37

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Have a lovely Christmas and enjoy all that life gives you,
Yours Ian.T , Family and friends... plus ellipsis....and kisses xx

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Tue, 2013-12-17 17:30

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ur kisses are blessings
upon a poet in the making

loved

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