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How to Purr

Submitted by Loreli on Thu, 2010-12-30 16:05

I want to learn how to purr
release the sound from deep below
the one caught somewhere in my throat
a voice I have but it’s hidden, remote.

It seems my desire has no cure
so I search my voice that you will know
what I’m feeling when my senses float
find passion’s scream I wish to emote.

I know it’s there when my senses blur
a lustful emotion I long to share
beautiful songs I have never written
purring love, I’m your soulful kitten.

Loreli

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Loreli

Thu, 2010-12-30 16:49

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This poem really isn't about cats at all you know....hehe! Glad you could help me with a few of the glitches in the lines before I posted it.

Love ya,
Lori

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Loreli

Thu, 2010-12-30 16:58

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Knew you knew! But couldn't help myself from saying it! LOL PURRRRRRRRR

Love ya!
Lori

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