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jokin ----kin
Hi Ian …you call me bro or bard …tis okay
send me my fare to London
I will come to meet a lovely one like you
and
borrow a million pounds or two
Oh your rich all know
maybe that's why your poetry does flow
wow you know
as Sadie also says so
some day your poetry will sell
but what will it fetch?
none can that ever tell
someone told me my poems will sell
a dollar a piece,
now how did he know
do tell
well
I am looking for fun
with a return tick -on rather ticket
as if I was your small son…
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Thu, 2013-11-21 04:13
Loved
Another comment poem,
My poetry is given away.
As I have said I am very rich.
Rich in that I need for nothing
Have plenty of love from others
And also give away smiles
As to money what is that
I have to spend all I receive each week.
Was going to Melt down my gold teeth but it burnt my mouth.
Take care young Bard I shall wait for your next Poem,
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Thu, 2013-11-21 08:59
do reseve some for me
....''''Have plenty of love from others
And also give away smiles....'''
loved