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w i l l .. e j e c t..

triumph
over
falling in a smouldering arc
the black dark realm

a glean of warm
stretchs
through
the darkest wretch
to find
the rarest rare

wounded
in stasis
like Love
hated and feared

wanted
in a reviled
fixture

the caress
of it
running
in its mixture

but the darkness
is moving
sweeping
up
like a gulf
a vortex
like lust
and
borne
with a might

truimph
over

love
shall

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Beautiful expression as always
it's a delight to read your imagination
through poetic version

one worthy of consumption…
like a pure glass of red wine …
in cut glasses fine
adds, savor to the flavor
like poetry does
yours…..

loved

then throw the fuel to the fire!!
the glass smash fire flare!

passion action!!

Thank You!

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shall return tomorrow

loved

and the dark heart that rises to triumph over that
loss..a rebirth
like a pheonix
a dragon of intense
cleansing.......

Action!!!
Like Love!! the great beat of a homeland..
eject ...its close to reject..
who hasnt felt that
but we are worthy

we are noble inside
we will pick up the fallen
values the gold
and rebuilt hearts
rebuild Love
from brick and ash

we are ghosts in
the ruins waiting
for the call

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which has sunk
I have copied it
to post a rejoinder

May not match
but maybe worth an endeavor
you can slash the
passion and obsession

loved

passionate poetry
composed as a sequel to yours

passion and obsession
since posted

loved

We find
An unlikely mate
the last we expect
Becomes the love
Of our life

Even the blackest soul
Knows how to love
Even the coldest heart
Knows how to feel

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

sometimes the poetic comments indeed here
are the out blast wave of the impact of words

one of the great things about Neopoet!!

and its writers!!

thank you!

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