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Experience cum knowledge

Experience cum knowledge
Today ....in fact just now I read a self appraisal

At times I have noticed
one drops words of wisdom
on my poetry,
which is hardly worth a dime
as my best critics chime
always and many rightly pokes
but more than education
it’s the experience ….which counts ….
I taught my mom,…. how to sign when she was nearing seventy… so that she could sign her Will ….

alas! she had nothing left… as her loveliest son
removed all of what she had
right under her nose

so no regrets ….nor repents…. we still live in hope!
She died educated ….

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You teach wise and wonderful lessons!

Heart of Gold.

Love Mand xxxx

I learn from all of you
9000 frnds
across the Internet

loved

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Your Mum touches her heart and extends her arms out to embrace you so there is nothing that can touch the love that is there..
A write that is for all to learn or think deeply on,
Yours as always Ian

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

a secret code
just say '
'''xyzxxxhhggxxzz....----...---;;;
and I shall kick the hell
OUT OF HERE

and before u know
u will be in my arms
she said so

and i know ...

but gutless bard that I am
I forgot the code
now I have lost a ready exit mode
shall await my turn
NORMAL..
ere I go
will u come along Ian
upto the last fence
No ! i know u won't...

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Others can only go so far with you, then you have to take that last part all alone it is a leap of faith.
There is plenty of time for such talk, no luggage that we can see, just the things we are and have done to pack in a spirit that says I am Loved.
Take care young Bard told you I will make a cup of tea for you, when you call on my abode, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I'll join you both - if I may - we can have a tea party! Sweet!

Love Mand xxx

u r welcome 2
but where should we meet ???
ask Ian will u ...
but you bring ur own cup and tea
I shall arrange the party

Then all of us happy shall...
nay ...
will be

none will go lonely
but the last jump
u may have to take
in ur own turn....

loved

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and you arrange many a cups of tea
so many want to join me

loved

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where 's the tea party ???
do say
I am getting ready anyway

loved

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The tea party is at my cave as you well know, there is no need to bring anything except your think.
Here there is always enough for all.
Mand, Loved and I will wait for you but seeing there is no time there, then we are together drinking tea in that other now, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

SEE U THERE
WHERE
U KNOW

keep it warm and cozeeeeeeeeeeee

hopefully bloody hot tea
not only bloody............

loved

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See you two their! He he

there we all shall meet
but will fail to recognize
as we shall have no eyes
still we will hope to hear….
oh hell where are our ears
we couldn't hear when on earth,
how in hell now
after the follow up of birth….
well then we smell the perfumes may be
but noses have also been drowsy
so wait for me
when I come to London
then make fun
we shall with utter abandon
all are welcome….

loved

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The eyes of the soul can see all things
You will know all people, the memory is infinite.
You will know me as I am, or will be in eternity.
All you have to do is call my name and there I shall be..
Loved, I have been shown many places in that world, and Sadie's place for the children is lovely.
I shall have to write of it but it is so different writing than seeing..
The colours there are more beautiful than any our eyes can see, they are used for think talk, and emotions, but will talk of these things when asked..
There you can make anything you can think, also we found out that you can send some things to them there, but that's another story.
Will talk later young Bard.. Take care and there is no hurry to meet there, it is another Now, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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