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Autumn Dreams 'with audio'
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1CDwQMLJs6QM1pvc1p1Uk5Ha1k/edit?usp=doc...
In Autumn dreams
Whistling wind chords sing
And leaves whirl wildly
Falling from tall oaks
Yellow, red, orange blade-like petals
Travels in the cool breeze
As I peer from my chair
On folded arm my chin rested
As winter played this wintry day
Snow flurries cover fallen leaves
Swooping down from treetops
Bluebirds footprints in the snow
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Roscoe Lane
Sun, 2013-10-13 03:57
Autumn
Autumn beautifully painted with words, Love Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2013-10-13 21:31
Thanks
Roscoe, thanks for reading and sharing. I've recorded it and it's ready to share, but I still seeking a way to find a way to get the audio file from my google drive or iPhone voice memo.
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weirdelf
Mon, 2013-10-14 09:38
Barbara, you need to read Beau's blog
"Audio on Neopoet" carefully. You can record the poem directly onto Vocaroo. You can also get apps on your device that allow you to record mp3's, which you could then transfer to Vocaroo.
nice poem.
cheers,
Jess
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weirdelf
Mon, 2013-10-14 09:38
Barbara, you need to read Beau's blog
"Audio on Neopoet" carefully. You can record the poem directly onto Vocaroo. You can also get apps on your device that allow you to record mp3's, which you could then transfer to Vocaroo.
nice poem.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2013-10-14 12:20
Thanks Jess
Vocoroo won't allow me to do so at the moment on my iPad or iPhone. I've done so with Google Drive. . You can listen to it now.
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Rula
Sun, 2013-10-13 08:35
Awsome !
Very nicely captured. Excited to listen to the audio dear Barbra.
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Barbara Writes
Sun, 2013-10-13 21:33
Thanks
Rula, thanks for reading and sharing. I working hard with Beau to get the recording from my iPad in Google drive and iPhone voice memo.
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Barbara Writes
Sun, 2013-10-13 23:01
Hi everybody
I never give up
I figured out how to submit audio from google drive. Easy, I guess it's the computer geek in me. lol
"Autumn Dream"
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1CDwQMLJs6QRzdpT0lYVklqWEU/edit?usp=doc...
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Rula
Mon, 2013-10-14 02:38
Working well
Thanks for sharing dear. I always thought that audio makes a difference.
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Barbara Writes
Mon, 2013-10-14 12:21
Rula
Thanks for listening and sharing.
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BlueDemon77
Thu, 2013-10-24 00:49
I quite enjoyed it Barbara!
I loved it. So calm and soothing and read with just the right amount of import. You're a natural!
Thanks Barbara!
Ron
Blue Demon77
"What I want is to be what I was before the knife,
before the brooch pin, before the salve, fixed me in this parenthesis:
Horses fluent in the wind. A place, a time gone out of mind."
The Eye Mote-Sylvia Plath
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2013-10-25 20:41
Ron
thanks for reading and sharing. Im glad your enjoyed the audio. I deleted several audios until i felt right as I often stumble in words. Just like grammar and error I must revised to get it near clarity. lol
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weirdelf
Fri, 2013-10-25 05:06
I am loving hearing poet's own voices!
I like the poem, though refrained from critiquing it before I heard it and now I love it and understand all your work a great deal more.
No wonder you have problems with traditional meter! It is not your language. I intend to go back and re-read some of your works with your voice in mind and I urge you to post your poems with an audio link more often.
This is so gorgeous, true and lovely!
(You know how seldom I get effusive, I am truly moved)
cheers,
Jess
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'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2013-10-25 20:55
Jess
Thanks for reading and sharing. It bring my heart joy to hear you say that. I wondered why meter was so hard. I write what I hear and to know it not traditional meter was a bit stressing.
My nature, in general, is different from any status quo as I tend to struggle with understanding.
As for having a different poetic language all my own may not be such a bad thing if people can enjoy it
Being told I'm natural makes me feel better knowing my strangeness can make a difference for good.
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