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water dish
the world in its saucer
is simple
the world upside
in the right
of wrong
arrived
not home
there is a place I can
and will be comfortable
sometime
instead I hold a cigarette
in the bold stark light
of the parking lot
counting stars
no one means their
business to be so sharp
they cant see it cutting
when they pull all
the anger in
all I can see it the
difficulties and tangle
and inside its just
more of the inane
question
no clean motives
anymore
just the pale
light of diffused
this and that
they can have it all
their worth
and sheilds
their cause to
rebel
somewhere coming
into town is an
answer
I wont let this one
pass without a cause
....
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Comments
lonlyhrtsclub13
Mon, 2013-09-30 21:56
Comfort
I seek as well
In your arms
I find refuge
An escape from
A troubled past.
Awake
I am dead
Suffocating
In the numbness
Asleep
I.am alive
As my.dreams
Lead me to
The peaceful place
Where you are real
In my fantasy
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
weirdelf
Tue, 2013-10-01 13:44
Wow! political
I have missed a lot of your poetry though this is the first I have seen that is overtly political,
Do more,
It is even harder to do well than love poetry,you never stop moving man, you don't just step outside the box. You challenge the Mandelbrot set.
cheers,
Jess
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Esker
Tue, 2013-10-01 21:17
An anger....sometimes Its a move to action...
a time to set down the cup
and start a swift direction..
loved
Wed, 2013-10-02 19:29
then become a PM
leave poetry mayhem
loved
Esker
Sat, 2013-10-05 20:35
perhaps only mayhem
ahem..