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Poetry and Grammar

Submitted by loved on Mon, 2013-09-30 20:40

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Friend your article comes
a century too late
I'm a distinction holder in Literature

Grammar a big Zero

they had to pass me
how?
now you know
so I switched on to poetry
with all its
glow
flow
slow
and dough
I’d let grammar down the Thames flow
MY HERE MY GRAMMAR
does go
and
here I too go

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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weirdelf

Tue, 2013-10-01 04:56

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that since you can't write English you write poetry.
A poor excuse.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

weirdelf

Tue, 2013-10-01 06:12

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You emulate their style badly,
but I will give you this, when you're good your are very very good. Unlike monanagics who could'nt write a good verse to to save her life. Tho poor bitch thought this was a social site,

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

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