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S e r r a t u s
rain limmerick
sharp as crystal
falling through
summers vents
passing
in gloss jewel
fragments
burgundy
gathered
on the iron
lip
falling
down
the dark
drain well
a thrown wish
coiled
bred
emerged
struck
smooth
tactile
the boney
verbs
rivers of nouns
and a hall
of stained nerves
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Ian.T
Sun, 2013-09-29 04:21
Steve
From Mountains to muscles then on to the gulf stream and a few other things that S e r r a t u s can be a picture of.
Here it seems you have chosen a journey from the fingers of rain as they fall, from thence to the drains on into the words of man, where the rivers of nouns and verbs run in rivulets, liken to the rivers of the minds ramblings.
I liked it but many of your writes go very deep, I just wonder how you arrive at these places,
Yours Ian.T
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