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Submitted by Geezer on Wed, 2013-09-18 18:46

When I/ have fears/ that I/ may cease/ to be
I met/ a trv'ller/ from an/ an/tique land
Shall I/ com/pare thee to/ a sum/ers day?

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I think this is what you want? Oops, missed an m!
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Editing - rough draft
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Rula

Thu, 2013-09-19 12:32

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Happy to see you could join .
 You should either use the capital letters for the stressed syllables or else choose the advanced form to make the stressed ones bold. I'll do one for you and you do the rest.Here you are

when I/ have fears/ that I/ may cease/ to be
 
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wesley snow

Fri, 2013-09-27 23:10

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Other than Rula's suggestion to use advanced formatting, it seems you have this, but I expected nothing less.

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