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LUNA :Italian/English

Submitted by Geremia on Tue, 2013-09-17 08:40

LUNA

Quando spunta ' a luna
piano piano me ne vado
sotto l' ombra pallida
come uno spirito smarrito
cecando i raggi del sole

MOON

when the moon rises
slowly I make my way
under its pale shadow
like a soul gone astray
searching for the rays
of the sun.

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Tue, 2013-09-17 17:06

simplicie e bellissima, bravo

Peace love and harmony light the path we must take. - MDT

Tue, 2013-09-17 17:25

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Wed, 2013-09-18 01:03

and meaningful!

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Wed, 2013-09-18 03:39

Beautifully written, thank you,
Yours Ian.T

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