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Seeding a newer generation

Submitted by loved on Sun, 2013-08-25 19:22

Friends of friends
Stan and Loved
you are friendless
we all are with you
Stan the man
sorry state of affairs
I had to read your poetry twice
after your well deserved retort
it’s good

really their spawn
should not be spread like fish do
humans are more sacred
we all know
and must know
as well as accept it to

and
so happy continuation
of a worthwhile generation to all humans
thanks for not calling me a dunce
others would

some have called me
a donkey too
but I forgave them too

nice good seeding sperms
for a population anew

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Mon, 2013-08-26 12:21

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A good comment on Stans write, I am still waiting for your next poem..
You can write a free verse one for me or a Monotetra to see how we both have done??
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Mon, 2013-08-26 12:35

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You are the only one who supports me

how then can I ever forget thee
my friendly one
and you are the only one
who likens me to a bard
here none have done so far

Stan and Ian are two solid pillars
of Neopoet …
without both the table may fall

then only Loved will be on call
but Ian you read so much
you are not jobless as I
but that you devote so much time
makes me question
as to why…..

loved

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Ian.T

Mon, 2013-08-26 13:14

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You ask why I devote so much time not only to here but to many things.
Young Bard I is Old now and know that every second of our time here is precious to everyone.
It is not a task for me to read the poetry or write a comment or two.
There are many of our poets out there someplace in their own worlds that love to have someone that cares what or who they are.
I have been told that I have finished my tasks here and so each day is an added part of being here.
It is easy for me as now I can give unconditional love to all and know it is never wasted.
Take care young Bard and know we are here, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Mon, 2013-08-26 14:46

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I couldn't stream it as Neopoets were on steam
no second post 24 hours jess said so
and now go

loved

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