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Prophesies Denied

Strategies devised
compromised by eyes
that lie
promises of clear skies

Realize,

Defies my sighs and binds the
rise
of those who try but we can't
rely
Only supply the size
of cries when we drive by

So,

Comply with my wishes and
no longer will you be suspicious
but defiantly malicious it seems
a stranger dream it brings

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A simple piece of writing of your thoughts,
Things will go right as you walk through life.
Less planing is probably the key,
As it involves other people, just plan for you.
Then no one will ever let you down.
Yours Ian.T
PS:- lets have more of these they are good..

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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