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TANTRIC SEX HOWZ IT

Submitted by loved on Fri, 2013-08-16 11:22

Tantric sex

Tantric sex
is sex-static
as it is fun-static
tantric teachings
6000 years away
is what foreplay
teaches us today

start today
but sex tomorrow
like elephants do
they take years two
then splash it all-in
liters full
in just a moment

that’s all what tantrics teach
they also want to do
what others do,
but with you
also with
quite a few
thus introduce
multisexuals too
like old wine
but in glistening
newer bottles
adds on to spicy life
as they say
to all of you
do as tantrics do.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Ian.T

Sat, 2013-08-17 19:04

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I don't usually reply to this type of work, as they are not in my field of weak vision at the moment or ever lol.
You said that you wanted the Naked truth and for us to feel free to knock you on to your back.
Sorry can't do that as it would mean saying I understand what you are talking about and that would leave me open to abuse..
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T. He, He.

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sun, 2013-08-18 00:29

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thanks

loved

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