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S T O R E Y R U S H

Submitted by Esker on Wed, 2013-08-07 14:32

tinge
these phantom tremor
rushed from the dark
an aperature door

apex a harsh crouch
like shattered love
the shards
bright tears
sharpening

falling

cascades the stilled
allusion

phantomes

and numbers bound
sequential chains
between the thin
shroud of touch
whispering
their gravitus

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

loved

Mon, 2013-08-12 18:59

loved's picture

when I have some feeling there
down under
down town
as
right now I'M CLEARING THE UNREAD JUNK
AS NONE READ POETRY
Almost NO ONE

loved

Esker

Tue, 2013-08-13 12:00

Esker's picture

like a sea hushed
a wind stilled

visions in the desparate wait...
dreams kept for starved
days
and hungry nights...

thank you ...

author comment

loved

Tue, 2013-08-13 12:11

loved's picture

uuuu doooooooo

loved

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