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w h i p p e t

contour
the delicate
shade

framed these shells
I walk rigid with
works
thrust in pockets delay

feirce hot ciccada days
rushing past the hours
free

a turmoils embrace
twisted like a bone healed

cigarettes haze
sleek past restless
souls

the burial envy
of brutalities work
dripping embers

egos anvil

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Comments

yahoo guys
all asking everything about whipping
mostly they are in their teens
no pop nor mom
in between any guys
and guys lonely
mostly 15

loved

public branding...
yes..
word association

Whippet is a form of sleek dog
all angles....
it was a popular brand of car
in the twenties when film ideologies
and books were something more
then pop culture...

thank you for the observation...

author comment

as BEATING OR WHIPPING
THEY R MAINLY
BEHAVING LIKE DOGS

caps unintended

loved

some are more nearer the drives
then others....
all of mine are strong
virile creativity...

author comment

only sexy ones can be
composers
writers
poets
and actors

all else just do
because they have to

hope ur now out on your way
have a good day
and return to say
Oh! ah!what a day!

loved

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