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N O C T U R N I Q U E T
conjecture
swimming
current dishevel
cascade mirage
shimmers
like a candle
depth
vortex
the golden halo
crown
on our lip of love
rappel
upon
the decline
of night
swirling
together
drawn in the
sinous
dark pasions
a pressure
gathering
momentum
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loved
Mon, 2013-08-12 18:26
on our lip of love...
all seems to be
like a guys nocturnal
'''....dark passions
a pressure
gathering
momentum'''''.....
sums up as the finale
you want me to spell it?
E J A C U L A T I O N S
uncontrolled as in dreams
one screams
though silently
unheard even by one’s own self
till one is finally
wet!
and that's a bet!
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Esker
Tue, 2013-08-13 11:59
a good observation Loved.
but I was thinking in a culmination of a wave
front..a bow wave..
the emotion
more along the lines of obsession
or compulsions
but they too have their climax
a more accurate descriptor...
but in these writes its open to the
interpretation to the abstract allows
a personalization that is somewhat
elusive..
one can read these and
"belong"
to them per say...
Thank You..
loved
Tue, 2013-08-13 12:07
Basically I am Freuds apparition
i think of
poles and holes mainly
and so is my poetry
holy more than righteous
now you also know
loved