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Sleepy if you say

Sleepy if you say
okay wait it’s a poem for you
naughty one over there
where
is your guess

as I said sleepily I profess
a poetry, off my night’s fanciful dress
now you guess
my poetry today
and
amend it later

I compose
a poem for you , you
who ?

I can’t say till
the poems enroute on its way
but sleep overpowers me right away
perhaps I may also go astray
let me compose a dreamy poetry
just for you all today

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

A dreamy poem sounds lovely - off into the world of fantasy where anything can happen. So this is a quick draft? - I look forward to seeing how you polish it up - and who it's too!

Love to you and your wonderful words.

Mand xxxxx

final draft
if i repaint or re-polish anything
it needs black paint
so i avoid it

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Try and stay awake will you, we are in the middle of a workshop here.

Visions of being in a classroom and there sleeping at his desk is our young Bard..

No response to the fact that Digit had gone to the Globe theatre in London to see the Merchant of Venice, were you sleeping again lol.
Come on young one, there is a serious mind problem with Digit, and I need some help lol,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

`the morning after
and stay sound and still
thereafter hahaaha

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I took the morning after pill
it just made me tired
so I fell asleep again.
Damn need to stay awake
or Digit might get me lol
Take care young Bard,
Yours Ian.T
PS:- If you have the time Brunels Kingdom, a play on words though the location is true and to make matter better his english grammar my have been bad because I am sure he was " Is am Bard " LOL I thought another Bard would love this one,

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

play safe at this age
what will sadie say?

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Sadie doesn't like the Digit pieces as they aren't on her think ways. We can only do this think here, You take care I will write of spirit later this week, maybe lol, Take care young Bard.
I guess though it must be me, as no matter how many people I comment on, I still receive very few comments on my writes, I shall probably have to stop writing on here,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

tc

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