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Quit or quite!

nice anger displayed
at a lover who crosses your way

and
Have signs to betray
and
take you astray,
if only you meant quit
to say
and
not remain quiet
till this final day

love is in the air
all in war and love is fair,
give him another chance
if you may

or
else quit immediately
as you now say

so do it right away
but not repent
anymore after today
quit if you wish to
just as you may

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To quit is to let the other person win without a fight..
Bad news!!
I have a few more years of battles on the fields of poetry as yet.
Anyone gives me shit I shall come back and haunt them LOL
I remember the old saying about lovers..
If you love someone let them go.
If they don't come back, hunt them down and kill them lol.
Take ( No prisoners) care young Bard, what or who is this piece aimed at ???
Go well see you later, Yours Ian.T
Oh! the write wasn't too bad lol.

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

expressed anguish

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thats good I thought my body armour was leaking lol,
Take care talk later, don't forget that normally an expression of anguish is usually a cry for help..
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

so I tried to help

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Just watch out
that your shields are up
as to walk in these ways
and become embroiled with love.
Is a minefield of emotion
that would make mush of you.
Take care young Bard know we are here with you,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I read everything that you write, but understand very little. This on the otherhand i like, the emotions and turmoil of love. That could have a double meaning lol, the poem or the poet. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

even i don't know
what i compose but

A poet is one
who has ignited sparks
in anyone
and one such one is you
hopefully too

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