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yankee hotel foxtrot
rain sizzles like a hot wind on spurned
skin
the vision taps gleam
hotly in the flicker of light
the crash falling
in through the dark black waves
of sleep
bright as a wing
full of sunset
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lonlyhrtsclub13
Tue, 2013-07-23 09:09
listening to the rain
cool sheets
body heat
breath on my skin
curled tight
amber skies
ignite
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Esker
Tue, 2013-07-23 12:47
creative despcript..
"breath on my skin"
again the intimacy...the closeness...
fave line of your comment Carrie....
thank you....
author commentlonlyhrtsclub13
Tue, 2013-07-23 12:58
your welcome
intimacy doesn't always have to be dirty, it can be simple and beautiful, like someone breathing softly on your skin or running your finger tips gently up and down someone's arm....
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Esker
Tue, 2013-07-23 13:07
in the stillness
long ago I remember these
moments...
the idle summer
the harsh winter
not dirty
not the driven or riven
hovering in the shadows
against heartbeats
together
or in the sluce of moonlight
stretched across an angle
of a room
author commentlonlyhrtsclub13
Tue, 2013-07-23 13:14
I remember them too
Nights curled up
wrapped in
each other
Gentle touches
warm embraces
passionate kisses
a time for exploration
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Esker
Thu, 2013-08-08 15:26
expirations
sunlight slapped on a dirty table
time stretching
its breeze taut
fraught duration
a machine hums
and a television murmurs
glimpses
memories
rise
dream forward expectations
beyond the extinction of the edge
the mirage
where the sky shimmers
and hope floats...
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