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Consumption

Submitted by ANC1996 on Fri, 2013-07-05 03:09

Consuming each moment
every plan, every thought.
Nothing else can exist
with this love bug I've caught.

Every word and every prayer,
each due to you.
Never felt a feeling heavier
until your love fogged my view.

You're a disease I enjoy,
a drug I can't quit.
Taking over my body,
my soul, and my wit.

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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words: 
Trying to get back into writing (once again). I'm finding it difficult to get around this writers block. So bear with me! Once I get through the hard part, maybe something decent will occur.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Fri, 2013-07-19 03:23

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If this is a blockage then I hope I have the odd one some times, you sure it's not someone you have met and your head is in that Love fuzz???
Loved the write look forward to more especially the continuation of this one LOL.
Yours Ian.T

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