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G u n n B e l t z

Submitted by Esker on Wed, 2013-07-10 14:36

the glass slippery with its lean
the tap flowing
silent drops
and an outside rain
thunders down like a wave
of scorn

torn is the winter arriving
the hurricane ferocity
a candle lament
and the darkness screaming
through a velvet fear

burning letters
firing fonts
and vortice
whorls

the old worlds
the carnival
joy
of exposure
in the lost

our land
of Lah

beneath the
surfs rush
the hoofbeat
tempo

the fire
deep
within the well

where all the
love was drown.....

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lonlyhrtsclub13

Wed, 2013-07-10 21:01

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Of love as we knew it...taken and twisted by a vicious world, our pasts lost with the changing of the times. Sunshine taken over by harsh winter weather...destroying what once was...just my interpretation. Love the language, as usual. Another powerful write..thank you Steven.

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

Ian.T

Thu, 2013-07-11 03:53

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A tale of destruction
Your introduction
To feed off of feel
Drown by thoughtlessness

Corroded by nature
Tortured to death
Nature also heals
Things love steals

The world turns on
You can belong
It is your eyes
They must learn to see
The things
Laid out before you

Journey on
Can't see
Around sharp corners

Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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