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MAZE

Submitted by Geremia on Wed, 2013-07-10 09:42

MAZE

I walk through the wilds
of childhood past
lost in the longing
nailed to the years by gravity,
stunned by my own existence
left to my journey of one.

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Ian.T

Wed, 2013-07-10 10:02

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There you go again, putting yourself into a downward spiral now it's called a maze, put the last two things together and add ing and that's what is around you
"Amazing" life and many things that you can write of and teach the young ones, you have so much to do in just the writing side..
Yep I is telling you off lol. You take care of you as you are unique and can teach many things, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

Geremia

Wed, 2013-07-10 11:31

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depressed--bad, chemical. but poetry is good. lol

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Ian.T

Thu, 2013-07-11 10:12

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Just a quick reply..
You are never alone within yourself and for future journeys, there are many that walk with you in the now and those that hold out their hands for when you touch them, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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