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Night staggers
the ruin of shells beneath her
steps

the blood of stars
from her goblet

a forest full of hunger
wet from a stream
drawn like a string

a bow of season
damp

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Powerful image.

Scott

COLOUR REFRAC'S
SWEEPS CURVE OF HIP
RAINBOW HUE
CHRISTENING

A CATHDERAL ANOINTMENT
FILTERED BLESSING
UPON THE UNCHASTE

CLEANSING THE UNWORTHY
LIGHT CARESSING THE
DUNG AND HALO
JUDGELESS

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