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Can you poets out there help punctuate this piece?

Can you poets out there help punctuate this piece?
how is it that I missed a drink of poetic liqueur from the glass full to the brim ,sim ,sim ,sim poetry begins and once at the brim, tim ,tim, tim it spills the cup or glass is never empty even after the drink it's full with plenty may not be the leftover of what you just cherished but think what from a glass can never be perished tis always there the love and beauty in the air as now you supposedly at an empty glass stare well tis time for me to walk to the beach and let me to the wilderness of far distant horizon reach to fetch another exotic poem as you always so naturally do poetry is the toast I drink to you...

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Do you really think that I could punctuate your poetry Lmao.
I can chop it up a bit for you then with deft taps of the keys you will see it through:-
how is it that I missed a drink
of poetic liqueur from the glass
full to the brim
,sim ,sim ,sim
poetry begins
and once at the brim,
tim ,tim, tim
it spills the cup or glass
is never empty
even after the drink
it's full with plenty
may not be the leftover
of what you just cherished
but think what from a glass
can never be perished
tis always there
the love and beauty
in the air
as now you supposedly
at an empty glass stare
well tis time for me to walk
to the beach
and let me to the wilderness
of far distant horizon reach
to fetch another exotic poem
as you always so naturally do
poetry is the toast
I drink to you...

That's your lot, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

i knew only Ian would do
some guy on the internet said
i give you 8.4/10
I asked him how did he slice a .01 and not make it a point 0,5
he said that's a secret
as now no punctuations will do

loved

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