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E v o l u a t i o n ........

Submitted by Esker on Sat, 2013-06-08 13:43

folded desire
font rich
pelted in rains
skin touched
sky blessed

glitter in the walk
freed from the symetry of the box
the velvet wander
the delicate
ponder

chrome chain duress
the soft nadir of her neck
curved and supplicant
pure and waiting

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ida

Mon, 2013-06-10 17:41

uninvited rejections
formed the slate
bond hobbled
leaning out for light
beauty luring
a cast of contradictions
the white softness
elixir

bravo chrome chain duress
thank you

Ian.T

Mon, 2013-06-10 18:41

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Innocence
Formed of thought
Drown days
happiness
Laughter in the distance
Chill winds
Then glowing embers
Reaching out
touch the velvet.
If the shade is right
Sleep
Drink it
In dreams
Tarry not
where cloth is worn
Time is always
Now
Clasp it
To your chest...

Your write brings forth words
from some memory that is hidden
from my thoughts, just to play awhile, Yours Ian.T

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