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CRUMBLED BRICKS

I once more dip my toe into free verse.............

Ruins
not just for the old world
any longer

Old factory abandoned
victim of neglect
and time
inexorable

Broken windows gazing
like cataracted empty eyes
no longer seeing anything
save memories
of more prosperous times

While within.........emptiness
where drafts ( or ghosts ? ) stir cobwebs
where once looms flew
or furnaces blasted
for an older generation
replaced

Elders in the mill's village
recalling old days now past
like dreams upon awakening

Every country has its ruins
some are just not as old
with histories not so
remote

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It seems some subjects just work better in free verse. Thank you for the kind comment...............stan

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You know I write what I see and I was looking in the ruin displayed in my mirror lol.....................stan

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you have turned ruins into edifices...

raj (sublime_ocean)

very kind of you to say so................................stan

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The fact is that it still stands, and that is a testament of time that live forever inside a sharp and imagine filled mind. you have draw a beautiful picture from the memories in your vivid mind.
thanks for sharing, what a grand Job!
Always Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

I thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a nice comment.................stan

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