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P * R * O * S * A * R * C * A * I * C

Submitted by Esker on Fri, 2013-05-17 13:14

China marker
head water

declinated
dampened
wave

rolling in the dearm verve
occupying
the steadiness
faded as the years

a rush through
a heart
nears

thunderpressed
vivid
opacity

I look for you there
......

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Esker

Fri, 2013-05-17 13:17

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awoke me in the heat of deep

I had forgotten you sweetly
lost on a curve
but how can love
unremittant as a stain
be removed from the fabric
of the soul

you lie against me
against my heart
like dampness

the suns smile
searching
the concience yearning

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Ian.T

Sat, 2013-05-18 03:42

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That you write so,
Tells me of a memory
Not forgotten
Often seen
The love so real
Now only a dream..
Know how you feel as it is nearly half my life (Next year) the similar memories are held within my soul, they are not a stain they are wonderful, and as much a part of us as our heartbeat..
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Esker

Sat, 2013-05-18 13:06

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I consume my time with IDEALS and PRINCIPLES
masqueing so much
and yet...how easy it is with fluid grace to chat with all
no partitions no social boundaries

love was much more then a sack of pillaged
potatoes and silver

it was refined
and honed...

quick as calculations fpr sea level and fuel
cosumption.....
as easy as buying candyfloss

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Ian.T

Wed, 2013-05-22 04:20

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You say, "I consume my time with IDEALS and PRINCIPLES" etc:
This is a way of life,

Then Love
Crossing all boundaries
It catches your heart
Moulds with your soul
Never letting go
Memories demise
Never to be erased
As yesterday's tasks.
In age a Companion
Secreted away to hold
Let these things never fade away as they are our tools.
The tools we use to measure all things with..
Love the memories of Love, they are so important.
Yet do I hear a sound
That thinks they have taken up too much space in our souls.
Always remember our souls are infinite.
Let us welcome each love with great understanding
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

ida

Tue, 2013-05-21 20:13

thunderpressed" you astonish thankyou

leaves within wax
volumes weight
transforms the soft silhouette
permanently

This is the end
Beautiful friend
This is the end
My only friend, the end
Of our elaborate plans, the end
Of everything that stands, the end
No safety or surprise, the end
I'll never look into your eyes...again

Esker

Sat, 2013-05-25 12:36

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specimens in jars
beauty tranfixed
I am mesmerized in the
freezer sections in the malls
and coolers

the preservations
careful articulations

care of careful creation

bathtubs...

for annointments and rest
peace
exchange

petals and wax

warm as a waterbed in October
to warm the pale chilled

..

thank You Ida!

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loved

Sat, 2013-05-25 12:46

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you write with an ink

that one fetches
from the garden
if at all
of what they all say
soul
and Esker you are alone
one,
after all thy soul
be the leading light of lovers
in danger and fright
as your words and experiments
resound
all humanity goes about you
around
and
that’s what about your poetry
I’ve found….

loved

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