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Krumbz

Submitted by Esker on Fri, 2013-05-10 12:43

saturation ghost
there are flicker visions
resting in neon

pallid like a shelter of dust
clinging
viscosity of being

I am hungry
and finding the trail
tasteful
and lingering

starvation meaning
brilliant
in its dream

tall on its legs
limber on the frame

backlit and steady
you lead me
deeper
beneath the eclipse of
stars
flaming and caustic

words of caution
like the flare in a votive
prayer

we step together
into the territory

further and further

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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ida

Fri, 2013-05-10 16:58

falling
upon quantum physic realm
parallel
before after
front no behind
house of mirror smoked glass
tall thin round short
nothing as it seems

But we were immortal, we were not there,
Washed up on the beaches, struggling for air.
Ian Curtis

words of caution
like the flare in a votive
prayer

blesses me thank you for your poem

Esker

Sat, 2013-05-11 13:24

Esker's picture

the heart leaps on
away

i remain waiting
knowing the fools rush that was

but when she arrives
asks about my day
steps into my room
with an extra two qaurters
for coffee...the light from
the living room window
shinning on her raven dark
hair swept aside sixties style
...
there was no blame
....

lost in madness
now lost in love.........

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loved

Sat, 2013-05-11 16:41

loved's picture

sexicity tis
we all can imagine
how difficult tis
to resist the dark raven black hair
strewn all about
and
then there remains no further invitation
without a doubt
esker
you are marvellus
many will wonder
what you must have been
when youthful
as you perhaps are still
not still
roving discerning eyes
do kill
when tis
the till
with free will

loved

Esker

Mon, 2013-05-13 13:57

Esker's picture

error..had to move poem to mainline from comment...left title here...only second
time in years doing this...

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