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Maggie's Magic Box

Submitted by Tam the Chanter on Wed, 2013-04-17 05:48

Maggie's Magic Box Limericks
(1)
With gales and in torrential rain,
Maggie Thatcher ensures some last pain.
Cops and army line route,
No doubt ordered to shoot,
And they'll do it again and again.

(2)
I relax with my champagne and smile.
Maggie Thatcher is dead, she was vile.
Let's hope there's no other
To act Hitler's mother,
For the Tories are all in denial

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Seren

Wed, 2013-04-17 09:13

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As I said before I still dont know much about her so I really cant comment on the theme for all I know she was the wicked witch of the west, the Limericks were well done I cant see anything I could suggest to help

nice to be reading you again its been too long

love JC x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Tam the Chanter

Sun, 2013-05-05 06:13

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Thanks for the kind words. Thatcher was the woman who single-handedly destroyed more British industry than the German Luftwaffe in WW2. I could go on but I won't. Great to hear from you again.

Love Ian XX

TIME FLIES LIKE AN ARROW, BUT FRUIT FLIES LIKE A BANANA

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Roscoe Lane

Sat, 2013-05-04 20:15

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Perfect Tam, i love it. Regards Roscoe....

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Tam the Chanter

Sun, 2013-05-05 06:18

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Thanks, Roscoe - glad you liked it. I keep sniffing the air for the smell of roasting pork as daemons from the seventh circle of hell should have her on a spit by now.

Ian

TIME FLIES LIKE AN ARROW, BUT FRUIT FLIES LIKE A BANANA

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