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REFLECTION
REFLECTION
and through the looking glass
I crept
to see the other side of me
all spells broken
and into a darkness
I fell
like Lucifer in his hell
for what the years
had truly taken
but despair finds its hope
somewhere
and what has been
by Time forsaken
is in Time forgotten
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Comments
Ian.T
Tue, 2013-04-16 04:26
Joe
You that worries of an afterlife or whatever and fears returning to your God, all I can say is, know yourself and judge the things you have done, are they balanced in the favour of good, then you should have no fear, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Tue, 2013-04-16 19:07
you have a way
to bring about the stress in your thought
as Ian does say
but carry on
with words do play
loved
Geremia
Tue, 2013-04-16 18:07
Thank u both for supporting
Thank u both for supporting me.
Ian, I wrote this for someone who is going through a bad time.
Ian.T
Tue, 2013-04-16 19:01
Joe
I have become use to a lot of poets asking of the future in their words, I missed you asking for someone who is having a bad time..
Please forgive but I think my reply belongs to many.
Take care Joe and walk with Grace, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Ian.T
Thu, 2013-04-18 10:50
Joe
Duplicate
Take care Joe and walk with Grace, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..