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"Wasting the While in Winter White Wash"

Submitted by Esker on Tue, 2013-03-12 01:30

(The flesh like film). he washes the stop baths,
the fixture on elements desired.

But the radiation has crept in, A web of eyes upon
the house stolen.

The anger seeped in like roots of a tree,
atop a chimney lain seed.

Esker. March 12 2013.

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Tue, 2013-03-12 04:51

About? Nice images but I couldn't make meaning

Tue, 2013-03-12 08:22

how dysfunnction like typhoid
slips in and makes a guest
of the house....

Thank You!

(how its washed over...rising like a dark water
until everyone learns how to swim in it...
the ballet of creatures....)

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Tue, 2013-03-12 12:21

even after that clarification . Perhaps playing a little with the title would make it easier .
I loved the image here though

The anger seeped in like roots of a tree,

A typo........dysfunnction

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Tue, 2013-03-12 13:16

no one can catch it though
Who
What
Where
When
Why...

Fun in Dis function!!
there never really is
Is there?

...

Thank You!

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