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you know...

lovely and enjoyed now,
well now,
sorry now is already over

like you say about
now,

I had a friend
long distance
he would always say..

you know....

then I would say
if I do,
then why tell me?

again he would say

you know !

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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You know
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
So no need to say, Yours Ian.T "U" No lol

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

how can I knock you on your back
you are guarding it so well
you know!

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And what's with the le moineau.
Are you guys all part of a network?
Is it drugs? Paedos? Porn? Pervs?
Oh dear is there an answer to this you know poem
What do you know?

We is all part of an international network of Broken Words,
Our main aim is to put them into order of lines.
Then to assemble those lines into blocks.
Then damn it we go to a place of sanctuary.
It is called Neopoet not Neopet as some would think.
Then what do we do we put them on a stream.. Rotflmao,
Yours Spuggy

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Ian

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You is just not in the know "U" know, if I knew that you knew then you would know, you know then we all would know lol..
Have a lovely day, we is not any of the three "P's You now know and I don't do drugs you know, Though you know I use to make rugs..
Have a lovely day out there where ever you are, yours le moineau.
Moineau
Nom anglais: Sparrow
Nom latin: Passer domesticus
Classe: Oiseaux
Ordre: Passeriformes
Famille: Passéridés
Ses ailes sont brunâtres avec des stries de couleur blanche. La queue est grise foncée. Ses joues et les côtés de son cou sont blancs. Sa tête est foncé bordée de châtain descendant le long du cou. Le plumage nuptiale, moins apparent que la plupart des autres espèces d'oiseaux est quand même présent. La tête du mâle se teint de gris. Le bec est gris noir alors que d'habitude il est brun clair. La femelle n'a pas de plumage nuptiale. This is in french so that you know what it is they call me young frenchf,
Yours Sparrow

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I would end on the second 'you know'
'blast it he was more deafer', this sea shanty dialogue is a different brand of humour and seems corny compared to what has gone before which is more subtle and clever, same goes for the deafer duffer pun.
'Brevity is the soul of wit'

welcome
and thanks taken

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