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futuristic sexuality

accept the pragmatism of time today ...
guys only love ...
since times immemorial to play ...
today you are trying to pin them down ...
for a while may be or you shall win....

but a time will come again ...
when men will ride all over again and again...
as living- in becomes the norm ....
women want orgasm..
which grand-moms having foregone...

gone who are those men...
who think they can do and get away ...
as soon as they can....
let the modern women hold theirs tight....
till men ooze out, out of fright .....

but that will not last for long ...
what will women do...
when men, modern men,
with other men have gone....

women will be left forlorn...
so wait and smile ...
men are males all their while ...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

Loved. Are you purposely trying to be *out there*? ET phone home! Take a seed, and grow it, please! I'm curious, do you still have a fan base?

This poem is just bad and I don't mean that in a good way.

~A

p.s. poetry like this would kill any romance, and without romance sex is no more than mental masturbation.

+7000 all over
and 2000 to 3100 ...read me daily
sad for u ...
why do you read me
you are welcome to
if you wish ..

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or as usual

unhappy to know that

103 have read this one
in just one day today

loved

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Ha! I'm sure as many read trash novels, visit porn sites and engage in *extramarital activities*, pedophilia, slave trade and murders, whether government sanctioned or not. Lots of folks still look up to Hitler too. I digress.

That doesn't mean your poetry is good, not by a long shot.

Someone has to get real, dear. Your ego is totally out of whack, it's so encrusted with self-serving trite. I'm just asking you to take one pearl and make it shine with the luster you may be hiding with all your trying to be *unique*.

And don't worry I won't ever waste my time reading you again, I was hoping to see some improvement. But I suppose a million apes typing on a million keyboards will eventually write Shakespeare. Not!

Cheers, Loved, after all that is said and done, you are Loved even if it's not because of your poetry. :-)

~A

THANKS
i love your egoistic narcissism

i love your egoistic narcissism

i love your egoistic narcissism

And don't worry I won't ever waste my time reading you again..*.
AND I DON'T EITHER
YOU VERY WELL KNOW WE DON'T KLICK ... WITH A K NOT C..
LEST YOU SAY SOME MORE..

*DO SAVE IT FOR RAINIER DAYS

BUT I LOVE YOUR SINCERITY
ONLY SOME WHO KNOW CAN SAY
I AM NO POET AT AAlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll BY THE WAY
as you so rightly say Head ape !..................a million apes..................hahahahhahaaaaaaa u said it friend

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crit·i·cize /ˈkritəˌsīz/
Verb Indicate the faults of (someone or something) in a disapproving way:

don't ever condemn or critize the poet

critique the poetry if you have the spunk/gal or whatever...

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Darling, I said the poem was bad. And because you repeat (ad nauseum) your followers, still doesn't make you a good poet. End of the monkey serial. Hint: eat bananas.

:-)

~

Social graces are lost in this interaction?
Do you both know each other well ?
Or is it a non British interaction?

ms french r u

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