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teenage transformation

galls all over -----angst....

in the world of transformation girl,
you dwell
this kind of story many do tell...

when moms and pops are at tangents drawn

kids do more than often feel forlorn ….

love them,
for even though growing up,
they don't at times act like grown up

so you are the thread
to bind them together


with your unfathomable love
they will live forever together,

this I can only hope to say,
because teenagers many,
have lead the life ,
you lead today

many have lead and become grown
young lass don’t you ever moan…..

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For explaining to us what we should all remember

happy u be


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A good reminder, but I give all babies and young children back to their parents and the teenagers I keep at a distance in case they corrupt my ways lol, Good write there young Bard, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

so far 300 have liked it across the Internet
and some have translated it into Spanish too..
GREAT feeling for poets pseudo like me..


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