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how dare you?

Submitted by sunscreen on Wed, 2013-02-20 02:13

How dare you compare me to him?
The one who ruined everything we had.
The manipulative selfish asshole.

After all I've forgiven
My heart you've stricken
You leave me smitten.

Selflessly I was there
my love I despair
Hatred I declare.

I'm still waiting here
Behind the setting sun
where we once stayed.

Close the door to the world
blind my existence
Leave me distraught and angry.

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

jzarmel

Wed, 2013-02-20 16:39

I like the write. Descriptive in every way concerning heartache.

Frenchf

Thu, 2013-02-21 07:44

Hopeless against the inevitable well expressed

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