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the hill so far
The distant is greener
humans alone have to
and secretly cheat,
animals are open and free
they have no society...
so we being from the animal kingdom
inherit their genes
but society lays norms unknowingly,
as those who do so
are passed their teens
they are prone to forget
what current life really means
it’s all in ones genes
we look at the other side of the hill mostly
so darker and green
till we reach the end
but by then we all have been
seen!
can't help the man made malady
twill for ever be...!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Frenchf
Sat, 2013-02-16 14:42
Is this to do
With animal and human sexuality?
loved
Sun, 2013-02-17 00:34
the sexuality
of mind
any ones .....
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