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yes you honour me
the worlds a fast moving away
towards eternity ….
moms and pops
play hide and seek equally
in the far folds of the universe
one has yet to traverse
an outstanding poet like you
as I stand out too
but you are exquisite
what am I
you alone can say
a legend will I become like you one day,
someday
only heavens can portray
let me not my wisdom betray
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
man…
a ticket to space for me
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Seren
Sun, 2013-01-27 08:43
one ticket to ride
You and Joe making poems out of poems sigh I think its wonderful to be inspired by other writers
I have been on many occasions
Love Jc xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Sun, 2013-01-27 11:32
you are e welcome to join
as a ticket less traveler hahahaa
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Geremia
Sun, 2013-01-27 11:52
as I stand out in the garden
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
OUTSTANDING !
loved
Sun, 2013-01-27 12:02
thank you Sir ..you inspire me beyond the beyond
...''''as I stand out in the garden
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
OUTSTANDING !
JOE GEREMIA
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Nordic cloud
Tue, 2013-01-29 02:21
You took the words from my
You took the words from my mouth,
as I rolled down this page thinking I would remark
on exactly the same portion of this poem:
"as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone"
Exactly, Joe and Jayne, wonderful.
Ann.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
loved
Tue, 2013-01-29 05:26
thank you ma'am
for your lovely comment
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