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lovely pragmatic ramble

all pain ought to be forgotten
once life has been milked fully,
birth and death are two faces of the same coin
one can't exist without the other...

so smile as you cast off the pain
and take leave of mankind,
let others not grieve as you fly into the wilderness
let them too celebrate your having walked this way,
some day we too shall fly away....

''''''would hope that death comes with swift
wings for anyone suffering ...''' .courtesy the lady poet here... hope she knows who yeah LOL

this is a hope and desire of all
hope scientists develop a switch
to end the suffering
and keep population under check

let us remember when the Lord lived
each one knew the other
today none cares
nor does bother
Who is ones neighbour...

the world is a -changing arena

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This is a ramble and needs to be more positive, it drifts, when edited you can take the drift out of the title, if you get my drift, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

draft permission granted
Dear Ian

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I see you :))

nicely done

love JC xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Portrayed!where when someone drops dead you step over them!
Agree with Ian though images are nice

NICE poetry no?

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Found this inside my keyboard this morning:-

Linguistically adept when pushed
Overly cautious with free feelings
Vies for a Bard to be with the world
Enclosed in a world that is shrinking
Devoted to give, though likes to receive

Have a lovely day out there where ever you are, Hudson Bay to Haiti
who knows where or what you are lol, Take care young Bard,
Yours, Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

than to be loved
despite ones anonymity
city
and being black or beauty
across the seven seas
Canada to Florida
Aussie maybe
or from Amazon ...
let not my being disturb anyone
for I am brought by the Divine
if there be one
to spread peace and comfort
for all down trodden...
so let it be my mission
yes under you all an admission
go not by my gender
colour or breed
just read this bard
and
of all anxiety be freed...

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