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ala commentez
you comment on my works
and
I shall yours as I always too
you ring my door bell
as others do....
then neither one of us will be alone
I promise you
but once in a while
when a guys guts ache
and so one is lonely too
and
when the docs at the gate
a pregnant lady is not lonely
isn't it so true?
So friends and friendly ones
when you are lonely and blue
who else can you think of
but a friend that have you
that;'s who,
you now know too..
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Frenchf
Sat, 2013-01-12 15:45
Isn't that so true
Nice but I rad it with a that rather than an "it"
loved
Sat, 2013-01-12 20:19
ok glad and
thanks to you
loved