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Christmas Past

Christmas Past

Blinking lights,
blue, red and green
glowing dull under
golden angel hair
silver tinsel sparking
colors in refraction
tears of pine bleeding
through the air
Christmas time
When you all were there.

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A memory of sitting under the Xmas tree and looking at the Angel there just out of reach, there is a time for all things and this was a time for Xmas and the family as they gathered around..
Take care young man the other gathering is out of reach for a while yet.
We need some more good writes as this is,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Yes, but the hard part is not knowing.

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Why should you wish to know what the future holds in its hands for you.
Is it not enough that though you knew what life had in store for you, that you chose your own route.
Now that other future which as you have been taught by many is so beautiful that there is no hurry to embrace eternity for, as you have many things to learn here and this is the place of learning.
Go well young Joe and never worry about something you cannot change only worry about the Now, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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