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MELANCHOLY BLUE--Updated
MELANCHOLY BLUE
All that has died in me
lives in memory’s keep
shadows deep
melancholy blue
in a crcle never-ending
relentless and unforgiving
I am taken back back
to wounds ever bleeding
Who I am today
will die to tomorrow
and when the world I know
begins to fade a way
I sink
into shadows deep
melancholy blue.......
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2012-11-25 19:29
Melancholy...
to say the least. It takes me around and around. ~ Gee
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Geremia
Sun, 2012-11-25 20:40
Yes. Melancholy is a circle
Yes. Melancholy is a circle difficult to break, like some in Dante's INFERNO are swept away in a never ending circle of eternal fornication as punishment for some carnal sin. :)
Geezer
Mon, 2012-11-26 03:25
That's...
punishment? I don't see how, unless you can't stop to eat or drink and you get hungry and thirsty. LOL ~ Gee
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Ross Hamilton Hill
Mon, 2012-11-26 00:42
geremia
this seems more a song than a poem
shadows deep
memory’s keep
melancholy blue.
thats the chorus..
Geremia
Mon, 2012-11-26 06:03
Yes, I could have made it
Yes, I could have made it lyrics.