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eche><lone

satire clone
I hear sighs
ringing
down the wires
dripping like raindrops
the pearls of
words
in a world

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eche><lone, not a clue as to its meaning, though your words, make out that you are hearing the harmonics of a talk with someone, and what they say in the sigh, behind the actual words that are pouring out.????
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

not bad but too brief to earn much attention

Like that sound one never finds out what..that wakes us from a dream
a dog stirred...and then to slumber again..

Its actually about Eschelon....a systems thing...electronic watching..

thank you

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