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young you

Submitted by loved on Sun, 2012-10-14 02:44

you are very young and beautiful
accomplished poet, keep it up
poetrys simply an expression
of one’s feelings,not really
of one’s own but also
imbibed from family
and friends none
can express what
you do yourself,
others change
dot a comma
here n there
then say this'
much better
can't u see?
May be!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Sun, 2012-10-14 03:48

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Thank you for this praise of me on a different page lol
You could have sent it by PM it would have been our secret.
Now everyone knows, an excellent write well above any standard I have seen here before, Yours Ian.T He He He.
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PS:- wonder how far you are going to get through the new long poems ?

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sun, 2012-10-14 08:01

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well am still working on them
found many
yet 51 is a long way
I see so many have read
so many
over 2600 reads on another site
but very few have time to leave any comments
so we shall have to
wait and see.

loved

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