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Violins Reassessed

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100 strings
1000, 10,000,
lusciousness
ad infinitum

"luminoso
tutti grandioso
con affetto
appassionato"

who could deny
this force of beauty
this source of cleansing joy
bathing luxuriating hearts
in the very vibrations
of love's eternal ecstasy

I'll slap 'em silly
the next ones
who deem this
elevator music

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talk about love for music, slap them silly. a dangerous man your are when it comes to your love for music. I say yes if your passion so demands it.
Always Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

You are music to my ears
I was always a bathroom singer,
A good one at that,
Till one day i sang,
A bit louder
My bathroom door opened
And my spouse did slap
Don’t holler
The dogs asleep
You’ll wake the poor guy
Then you will weep,
As you will have to go out
In the snow
I can’t walk
That you know.

Thence i abandoned singing
But once in a way,
When my spouse is away
When the door bell does ring
I do try to sing
Again
Out of sheer thrill
Not pain,
To my dear spouses
Disdain

loved

Were I a musician, I would hope for my music to some day be in elevators as it would be proof of its longevity lol.......................scribbler

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