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only if

if only you had visited my profile
much earlier than now,
you wouldn't have met such a fate
sad tis late somehow

all along my profile
I speak of virginity
of body, mind and soul…
men only have a single goal
about how to lay
and then let with her youth
others play

they move on to greener pastures
and this is what makes for dismay
disillusioned teenagers fall
for false appreciation,
all guys have two heads
but think with only one
the lower

and

mind you all guys
till they are at the entrance of the last fall gate
they think they still have a chance
to have just one this last play,
ere!

so I have composed many poems
for all gals,
of all generations
but all don't believe
a word of what I say
until they have had their own vicious
foul experience at play

then they say
Hello...
how I wish I had read your poem
before that saddest day

''No You Just Can’t''

How in heaven will gals learn?
those guys have no other machination...
okay manifestation....
Ah! imagination

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eventually shows. I think we'll both be alright.

Blue Demon77

"What I want is to be what I was before the knife,
before the brooch pin, before the salve, fixed me in this parenthesis:
Horses fluent in the wind. A place, a time gone out of mind."

The Eye Mote-Sylvia Plath

maturity pays

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Good luck to you.

Blue Demon77

"What I want is to be what I was before the knife,
before the brooch pin, before the salve, fixed me in this parenthesis:
Horses fluent in the wind. A place, a time gone out of mind."

The Eye Mote-Sylvia Plath

...,.,.

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